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just before sleep

In the quiet stillness of early morning
When everyone has all gone to bed
a quiet ringing goes through my ears
and through my head

I listen with my heart
and strain to feel your spirit
in my dim surroundings 
I close my eyes and hear it

It doesn't diminish the sense of longing
or the sense of sadness
or the feeling of not belonging
or the silent madness

But I feel you calling
an uspoken invitation
I wish that it were true
and more than my imagination

I wish I could feel near
the softness of your touch
and the gentleness of your hand
and the beauty of your blush

But in the early morning hours
I close my eyes and feel
and strain and imagine
that you are real

and in this lost moment
When my thoughts tend to wander
its you I long for
and you I ponder

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InnOc3ntLove315
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awww!!! i love diz poem!!! itz super nice!!!!! keep up da good work!!..i realli like diz one!!=)
 
kellyvs
kellyvs
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thats very good i love it
 
OndreHarris1
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I love your work. You bring out the true essence of throughts and Ideas. I can visualize what you are saying especially when you end your poem with," When my thoughts tend to wander its you I long for and you I ponder". Beautiful!
 
morninglight
morninglight
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thank you for the nice comments.
 
debbiemy
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love this. :)
 
morninglight
morninglight
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thanks!
 
Sunshine85
Sunshine85
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i wish someone cared like that about me lol. Good job!!!
 
morninglight
morninglight
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Thanks, you made my day. I guess I touched on something by accident. I"m happy you liked it. Yes, men do have romantic thoughts but I guess they're not often shared and sometimes wasted. Don't lose hope, someone will appreciate you. They say love doesn't come when we want it, but when we least expect it....sometimes I guess.. after we've given up hope.
 
arteen_10
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yu making me cry.. makes me go hug my babyy tightt.. ii love this boemm.. keep da good wrok and show us something new and nice like this.. thxx
 
morninglight
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Well thanks. Its Christmas Day and while the day felt bright I just got some bad news. I forgot that I wrote this and just read it again when I read your comment. I'm glad you liked it. What I didn't realize was that it's words would have meaning to me again today.
 


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