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it hurts

it hurts 2 see u gonne
it hurts 2 say good bye
i still love u baby
u told me i was the one u wanted 2 marry
member those times we use 2 kik bak
n i would lay in ur arms
it hurts 2 c u gonne
it hurts 2 say good bye i still love u
but u dnt seem 2 care u leave we 4 ur friends just 2 go blaze
my love 4 u was s0 real u just hurting me and ur killing me
fuK dat shit iv been through enough im moving on and letting u g0
it hurts 2 c u gonne it hurts 2 say food bye

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I think you could put your thoughts in standard English and you'd reach a few more people and you'd still be you. But I was just thinking....I'd have missed that surprise "fuK dat shit" which made me laugh. I liked this poem a lot. It really does hurt so much, I know just how that goes and feel sorry for you. You've had to develop thick skin and a false sense of pride that pushes people awa. But it's lonely inside. I know just how that goes too..trying to be so strong as if nobody can hurt you. This is why I liked this poem..you showed your vulnerability and reading this I felt your sadness. Remember, your heart inside....you're free to feel whatever you want to : ) Hope life opens up for you a little more and brings you some happiness. Instead of being caught up with where you are right now....dream where you'd like to be....maybe a life completely different from life now because this stage of your life will pass quickly.
 


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