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i love u,u never loved me

I have always loved you
,you were the rain i wish i could play in,
you were the china that i wanted to touch and drink from,
you were like the scent of fresh
dandilions on the first day of spring
or the warm sun on a cold windy day,
i have always loved you,
yet
you have never loved me
,i was like water left outside for days,i was the plain plastic paper plates you ate off and threw away.
i was the like the cold bitter snow in the middle
of januray.
or the cold white moon in the dead of night,
you have never loved me.

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DepressedDani
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woah thats really good x
 
morninglight
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Cold snow in the middle of January is nice for a skier!!! I like this poem too.
 
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it is really nice
 
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this is really vivd. i love that line about the smell of dandelions.
 


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