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hours,days,& months

the days felt like months;
the months felt like years
the hours felt like days
and while i waited i hoped amd prayed
that you would be mine again
no i dont want to be just a friend
i want you to be my baby girl
my everything my whole world
no i wont be like the rest
i'll be your #1 the best so just forget about the rest
im the only one with the red S on my chest
your my fallen angel and forever i will catch you
make you smile when your feeling blue
be the only person who stays true
your love is the only way i see the light
i'll be your night and you'll be my star shining brighte
i know there will be times we fight;
but no matter what i will always love you




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JungleJim
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its a little self-serving.... I don't think she's going to buy it..

Think HER!! Less YOU!!
Promises! Promises!!

The "S" for what? Solitaire? Well, as long as baby girl knows...that's what matters. Good Luck! It's nice....but it's got to be more than nice....its got to be believable, honest...and it't got to Sell!!
 
reyhudsin
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its no to anyone its just random and i was bored s so i just startded writing it.
 


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