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guess who?

when i close my eyes,
guess who i see?
i see only you,
and your grinning at me.
when i stretch,
guess who i feel?
i feel your warm skin,
and i swear love is real.
when i actually listen,
guess who i hear?
your words said so quiet,
could not be more dear.
when i breath,when i blink,
when i dream, when i think,
guess who i wish to feel to feel and see?
i see you, winking at me.
...guess what just shattered
into thousands of bits?
guess who broke what,
who caused tears to slip?
because i open my eyes,
and guess what i see?
i see you with her
...instead of with me.
when i stretch,
what do i feel?
you pulling away,
touch colder than steel.
when i listen,
guess what i hear?
her annoying giggle
piercing my ear.
when i dream, when i feel,
when i wish it wasnt real,
guess who i picture,
guess what i see
shes in your arms...
and your forgetting me.
guess whos crying
and wishing to die
guess whos wishing
what she'd felt was a lie...
you broke my heart, all the way through
and, the sad part? i still love you
guess who broke what,
guess what fell apart,
if it wasnt for you-
id stillHAVE a heart.

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XjaylaX
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this is my favorite. actually beautiful.
 
XjaylaX
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when i dream, when i feel,
when i wish it wasnt real,
guess who i picture,
guess what i see
shes in your arms...
and your forgetting me.



that stanza is perfect. i completely relate
 
tornheartsneverheal
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thanks...glad somebody does
 
thialuvzya
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wow, this is my fave too, i think.
lol, its hard to choose!

and jay is right, that verse is perfect,
and i think we all felt something like that at some point in our lives, i too can relate.....
 
ShelbyyGirl
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this was a very recent feeling for me... it's still going on i love it it explainded what i was feeling
 


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