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enough

i've tried all i can do for you but is it ever enough?

i've kept you close to me and kept safe all your stuff.

but in the end i tend to let you down over and over again.

i feel helpless and almost ready to give up

but i have to remember what you said "you never do enough"

i cry myself to sleep trying to find out ways to make you smile

i try to make you laugh cause it seems you haven't done that in a while

i go over the day in my head seeing what i could of done wrong

i may find nothing but you still feel like something doesn't belong.

i try to do everything but then you say i'm acting too "rough"

so once again it's like i'm never doing enough!

what else can i do. TELL ME ANYTHING!!

or are you just thinking of ways to keep me from standing??

i'll fall to my knees just so you can see

i'm not fake. i am something real!!

i don't lie just so i can feel!!!!!

you may think that i am just acting like someone tough

but i'll act like anything.. then will that ever be enough???

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Forsaken66
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this is good. I like it. and hope things work out for the best for you =/
 
pirate151
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pain and love are in us all to feel whole is only for us to know that none of us are without sin! life is giving and caring for others so we can see that our problems are ever so small!
 
Roselia
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Damn.. I loved this. Raw, heartfelt emotion seldom fails to attract the minds of even the most warped out. Such as meself. lol

I can understand your frustration and hurt in this, it's apparent in your words (which by the way are pretty damn good). You lured me into your mind for a little bit and I sympathise with you.

I wonder if anything will ever be enough for anyone.

People these days..... arghh gotta love 'em aye.

Anyways hope your all good at mo' chicky.. I'll even drop in me common cliche of

'Life's too short'.. go out and live.

That's what I reckon anyways..

Take it easy yeah!

Tc
 


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