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cheatcheat

Her breath's coming fast,
but mine's falling slow.
How could I ever believe,
that you wouldn't know?
When I next see your face,
you'll see my eyes.
You'll see all my love,
my guilt and my lies.
I can't take it back,
with "this is not what I do,
I just wanted to get even,
not by cheating on you..."
The noises she's making,
they don't sound so sweet.
The walls, they are shaking,
screaming "cheat, cheat".
True it's smooth flesh,
she's somebody new.
You were always fresh:
Truth is she's not you.
I've tainted my touch,
my fingers are black
I love you too much,
to let you take me back.
She's locked to my side,
and I can't see very clear,
She see's my eyes wide,
but can't see that your here.
I know you won't fuss,
but I know you will flee.
It was always about us,
until I made it about me.
And the noises she's making,
the walls cease their shaking.
My fingers are black,
please don't take me back.

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Justpassingthrough
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Mercedes...this is a very good poem. It really captures a feeling of guilt of cheating. Cheating for the sake of getting even doesn't make the pain you felt go away. It brings a new pain and you realize you tainted your love. Now you feel empty and nothing is the same. Love has been reduced to sex and sex doesn't feel so special witout love.

People learn this the hard way but there is a lesson here for everyone. If you love somoene, stay true! Love is such a precious thing and when you go astray the sex is only like a fix for a junkie...it feels good but it's really a long downward spiral that spins out of control and leaves you empty and lost.

Be honest with the one you love. They may turn from you but if they love you and you love them. They'll see the regret and sadness in your eyes and maybe you can slowly men the guilt and heartbreak.
 
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Hello "MercedesBayybe" - I'm not in the best temperament as I had to go to the effort of creating an account to tell you to remove my poem off your page. It's pretty heartbreaking that your taking my work as your own. As you know full well this is mine and you took it from my account "kiss-me-better" on quizilla. If this doesn't go soon I have sufficient evidence to actually sue you as on my account my poem is dated on the twenty third of september. I'll give you time to remove it before I report you. Thanks for the comments "just passing through"
 


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