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bridge worthy goodbye

she looked into the churning brown water with what could only be called morbid curiosity.what temperature was the murky abyss?
would swallowing enough of it end a life?how long could it keep a body afloat before dragging it down?how fast could it it kill?
she shook her head.life didnt make sense anymore,because meaning for it was completely gone.gone...like him.
he saw her peering over the bridges edge,and a vain hope ran through him- maybe he could stop her.
he ran towards her,shouting her name,that he loved her more than anything.... she gave him one sad,final smile.
"to late..."
with that,she flung herself over the bridge,and disappeared into the sickening water below.
he sank to his knees,so deep was his grief.shes gone...to late.......to late...


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this is soo sad, but its well written.
it sounds like a novel,
you should turn it into a book.

=D i'd read it! =D
 


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