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as she walks away

as i watch you go in the pouring rain
thoughts race across my mind
almost on the brink of insanity
should i chase after you
and beg you to stay
or should i just sit here and watch you go
taking my heart with you
yet remaining silent
with my face impassive
but my heart breaking deep down inside
so afraid to show my weakness
yet even more afraid of loosing you forever
my heart screams for you to stay
my tongue silenced by my uncertainties and doubts
my soul willing my legs to follow you as you go
yet my pride chaining me
not only to this chair that im sitting on
but to the asurance
of how painfull
of how empty
of how lonely
my life without you will be
goodbye my love.

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binth32
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what would you do? id love to know. :)
 
pumpkinseed
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personally id run after that person and make them stay,but thats just me..i tired and failed when somthing similar happened,i loved him deeply,sometimes u just cant make the one u love and the one who loves u stay..and when that happened it broke my heart
 
Skhin
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I'd put away my pride and expose my weakness ... because living with regrets is worse
 
Robin Brown
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How sweet :( and sad I love it! It's so pretyful
 
Robin Brown
Robin Brown
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How sweet :( and sad I love it! It's so pretyful
 
longtack
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I found it very touching in a sad but true way, we can't stop someone from choseing there path in life they wish to walk.
 
miserablebabygirl
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if i loved that person and knew that without him i couldnt go another day i wouldn't care to show my feelings and vunerbility. I would chase after them and try to make them stay. but then again you cant make them. so just enjoy the time you have and live every day as if it were your last.
 
miserablebabygirl
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if i loved that person and knew that without him i couldnt go another day i wouldn't care to show my feelings and vunerbility. I would chase after them and try to make them stay. but then again you cant make them. so just enjoy the time you have and live every day as if it were your last.
 
binth32
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thanks for the thoughts and thanks for the votes. :)
 
kalamazoo247
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wow this is really good.. i would try to make the person stay but you can't make choices for a person if they loved you enough and you loved them enough there should be a strong bond there and you should be able to express yourself. but if they dont stay dont regeret it becuz life is too short!
 
kalamazoo247
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wow this is really good.. i would try to make the person stay but you can't make choices for a person if they loved you enough and you loved them enough there should be a strong bond there and you should be able to express yourself. but if they dont stay dont regeret it becuz life is too short!
 
kalamazoo247
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wow this is really good.. i would try to make the person stay but you can't make choices for a person if they loved you enough and you loved them enough there should be a strong bond there and you should be able to express yourself. but if they dont stay dont regeret it becuz life is too short!
 
kalamazoo247
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wow this is really good.. i would try to make the person stay but you can't make choices for a person if they loved you enough and you loved them enough there should be a strong bond there and you should be able to express yourself. but if they dont stay dont regeret it becuz life is too short!
 
binth32
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thanks.. sometimes the body does the opposite of what the heart does. and most of the time.. the result is always regret.. and pain. . thanks for the vote! :)
 
binth32
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every day i miss her more.
 
longtack
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I know the feeling to well, i miss mine more and more every day that passes, only in my heart that the memories remain......
 
binth32
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ive been gone for a while..
 
Caroline R.
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thats really good
I kno how you feel..
 
Roselia
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Wow. I like your thoughts and how you put it all together - It's the kind of feeling that every person has experienced or will experience in their lifetime. You captured it well..

Good on yah mate.

Roselie
 


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