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![]() | its so sad, i know the feeling, although am one of the lucky one who wasnt physically abused but there are other kind of abuse... its a very emotional poem... | ![]() | |||
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![]() | Chills!!! is all i can say. I dont know if reading that makes me angry or sad? very well written, i hope it is fictional. either way your expression and feeling came across superbly. WOW. wow | ![]() | |||
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![]() | WOW THAT WAS CHILLING AND SAD ! I HOPE AND PRAY FOR THOSE THAT GO THOUGH THAT IN ANY WAY ! WHY WOULD ANYONE DO SUCH A THING! WOW THOUGH I FELT THE PAIN! | ![]() | |||
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![]() | THis is good. You brought me in the eyes of a three year old child. God I havent been able to see that way since I was...well three. LOL. very few people can do that to me. I find as I read you work its getting stronger, more pronounced, independent, containing more depth each time. I remember when I started discovering writing. At one point there were endless possiblities, I wrote something amazing everyday. I feel your heading there keep it up, you will be most pleasantly shocked when you see how capable you really can be. | ![]() | |||
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![]() | Abuse is a terrible thing to go through. Your whole mindset about yourself is so negative and wrong that you question your worth and shoulder the guilt because you believe that you brought it all on yourself, when in actuality it's got nothing to do with you at all. YOu just happened to be there, to bear the brunt of it. You have a rawness and honesty that shines through in your writings. This was well written and executed brilliantly, in writing such a powerful piece you've succeeded in capturing our attention and getting us readers to feel your pain and the pain of others who have been in similar situations. Speaking out is hard. But for some of us, ignoring it and pretending it never happened is better than acknowleding that it did. Nice work! | ![]() | |||
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