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abuse

my name is sarah
i am but three
my eyes are swollen i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made my daddy so mad?
i wish i was better
i wish i wasnt ugly
then maybe my mommy would still want to hug me?
i cant speak at all
 i cant do a wrong
or else ill be locked up
allday long
when i awake im all alone
the house is always dark
my parents are never home
when my mommy does come il try and be nice
so maybe il just get one whipping tonight?
dont make a sound!
i just heard a car
my daddy is back from charlies bar
i hear him curse..my name he calls
i press myself against the wall
i try to hide from his evil eyes
im so afraid now
i start to cry
he fids me weeping
he shouts ugly words
he says its my fault he suffers at work
he slaps me and hits me
and yells at me more
i finally get free i run for the door
he,s already locked it
 i start to bawl
he takes me and throws me against the hard wall
i fall to the floor
withy my bones nearly broken
and yet my daddys abuse continues
with more bad words spoken
"im sorry"i scream
but now its much too late
his face is twisted
with rage and hate
the hurt and the pain happend again and again
oh please god have mercy
oh please let it end
and then finally he stops and heads for the door
while i lay there motionless
sprawled on the floor
my name is sarah
i am but three
and tonight
my daddy murderd me

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ayie
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its so sad, i know the feeling, although am one of the lucky one who wasnt physically abused but there are other kind of abuse... its a very emotional poem...
 
MPetrie
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Chills!!! is all i can say. I dont know if reading that makes me angry or sad? very well written, i hope it is fictional. either way your expression and feeling came across superbly.
WOW. wow
 
pirate151
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WOW THAT WAS CHILLING AND SAD ! I HOPE AND PRAY FOR THOSE THAT GO THOUGH THAT IN ANY WAY ! WHY WOULD ANYONE DO SUCH A THING! WOW THOUGH I FELT THE PAIN!
 
Josh Wolski
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THis is good. You brought me in the eyes of a three year old child. God I havent been able to see that way since I was...well three. LOL. very few people can do that to me. I find as I read you work its getting stronger, more pronounced, independent, containing more depth each time. I remember when I started discovering writing. At one point there were endless possiblities, I wrote something amazing everyday. I feel your heading there keep it up, you will be most pleasantly shocked when you see how capable you really can be.
 
Roselia
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Abuse is a terrible thing to go through. Your whole mindset about yourself is so negative and wrong that you question your worth and shoulder the guilt because you believe that you brought it all on yourself, when in actuality it's got nothing to do with you at all. YOu just happened to be there, to bear the brunt of it.
You have a rawness and honesty that shines through in your writings. This was well written and executed brilliantly, in writing such a powerful piece you've succeeded in capturing our attention and getting us readers to feel your pain and the pain of others who have been in similar situations. Speaking out is hard. But for some of us, ignoring it and pretending it never happened is better than acknowleding that it did. Nice work!
 


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