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a day apart

With you opened is a new door
every moment away a shade poor
in remembrance and in fact, drowning
there is no airy sustenance, again i am drowning

why write for such sweet sorrow
is it cause of cupids love struck arrow
surely i am struck, but nay tis for its name
love and Amanda, one in the same

with whom but a day apart
writhes with melancholy this besotted heart
if without is there anything pleasant to see
nay, not for me

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you truely write beautiful! :-)
 


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