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Winter Moods; The Storm

By Mitchell Thompson
12.12.2006
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winter moods storm


	I stand alone in the middle of the field Watching and waiting for it to come I watch the mountains, each one in turn Then my eyes find what I'm looking for The storm clouds hang over the horizon The echoes of thunder are empowering The lightening dashes to and fro And there's that something in the air This storm is just so captivating The atmosphere is electrifying And as time wears on like an aging face The time has come to dance Down from the clouds in the heaven's sky Burns the cleansing tears of angels They wash away the dirt and grime Of shadows which weigh down on my heart It is in this rain a dead soul like me Can heal amongst such intense power And grow to be stronger amongst the shadows And learn to flow with the tides of time And then I'll be welcomed in by the sun Which peaks over the clearing clouds And my dead broken heart will be reborn To burn like the fiery sun, for you...

Craig Jacks

1193 days ago Reply

I know you got skill, If you can take some helfful criticism, maybe you would get a better response with your work by shortening and condesing some of your pieces, it may not be your favorite style, but others may enjoy it more. You got the talent!

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