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	Darkend skys Pouring rain Watching the fire Lose its flame Staring eyes Harsh words Meaningless love Losing my nerve Tears welling up Sufficated pleads It appears to me That time has ceased As water surrounds My frail body in the sea Filling my lungs My soul wants to be free Floating to the top With eyes wide with regret But with everything they said What would you expect?

ptmnkyl

306 days ago Reply

wow that is really good.... i like how u used the your words to create a certin emotion and how i can feel that emotion when i read your poem it is amazing... keep wrghting i would love to read some more... :)

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