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Walls

I understand the walls you built,
As my distrust in life has grown,
Where once i tried to breach your walls,
I find i`ve built my own.

To block out any future hurt,
Imaginary or real,
I cant go through that pain again,
I cant afford to feel.

Your walls were built from men you`d known,
Who`d lied and had hurt you,
And just as they had helped you build,
You`ve helped me build mine too.

I hate these walls we hide behind,
That are built without our say,
Designed to keep us safe from harm,
When our hearts are in decay,

We think were safe behind these walls,
Where we block out any pain,
But we also block out any love,
And for me thats just the same.
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Skhin
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..sigh...I feel your pain and that shiz sucks.
 
mfinney
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very nice leif. and oh, so very true. moving.
 
galadriel
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yeesh...I like it! I wish I could write like that.....sigh.....
 
XxXInnocenceXxX
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i feel like screaming my head off. great work
 
NiceGuy
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You have transfered your feelings well into the lines of such truth.
 
jrwilliams
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That is a really awesome poem! I know how you feel.
 
Dann
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your a great write and i know what ur saying and i love how u can find the perfect words to express your feelings
 


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