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WHEN U LEAVE HEARTBROKEN

When you leave heartbroken
You also leave unspoken
You don't know what you are feeling
But you know that you need some healing
You know exactly why it hurts the most
That your heart has been left real soft
You don't know exactly where it hurts
But you have been hurt by your first
The first person you loved don't love you back
But your feelings for her will forever stack
They will stack one on top of the other
But you'll always keep your feelings under the covers
It just hurts so badly as if you have lost your mother
Or even if you have lost your brother
She has changed you in an inexpressible way
But will it be your feelings that'll take you astray
It's messed up when her best friends trying to tell you it'll be OK
So everybody just please stay away
Before this big ball of negative feelings bursts
So stay away before you end up being the one that hurts
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Trevathan
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i like this poem it connects with my feelings
 
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I LOVE DIS POEM. I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE U. KEEP THE GREAT JOB!
 
mzladykeki
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this poem is good... good job.. keep it up..
 


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