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WHAT WE HAVE BECOME

what have we become?
would you even flinch if i told  that i cried?
that my sun no longer shined?

you have left me to rott  away in this  sad pathetic exscuse for what they call a body
im a breaking heart in an empty chest

my lfe its importance is getting less and less
i feel it as i struggle to go on

and all because of what we have become!
NOTHING.

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Josh Wolski
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Short but very powerful. Brief but potent
 
Josh Wolski
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I really liked it, Great work
 
pirate151
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Nice work! I hope you find someone new !!
 


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