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WAIT.....

Time Clicks as I await
The hour ends before my take
Sitting, thinking, waiting; my mind escapes

The day grows old as night passes
Wolves crying, coyotes howling; anticipating
Watching, staring, seeing -- nothing

Silence begins the day
as morning comes without notice
Tears begin to fall, slowly

The day moves on without hope
Wishing to be what is not to be

The sun moves to its peak
without a whisper or retreat

Time moving, but still empty
Stomach aching, curling
Still waiting



I NOE U WONT CUM BACK BUT I DONT NOE Y I STILL WAIT Y I STILL HOPE.....

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jrwilliams
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162 days ago    Reply
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(sniff) That poem is so sad! Don't you even want to move on? You know, it's good to be TOO obsessive, but i do know how you feel.
 
little inch
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149 days ago    Reply
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awww so sad, but still such a beautiful poem!
 
LittleAngel
LittleAngel
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105 days ago    Reply
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your poem touched my heart alot... good job, i'm feeling sorry for you...
 
redroses12
redroses12
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77 days ago    Reply
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but dont you think that time goes really faster without realising it!!!
well, relly like your poem!!
 
laurie567
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56 days ago    Reply
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thats deep I love it
 


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