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Untitled. Older poem. Rhyming free verse.

I thought I found the road to somewhere.
It soon turned out, it led me to nowhere.
I can't escape this place, and it's full of pain.
It's like I'm stuck and I'm going down a drain.
I can only hold so long; my breath.
Before I choke and face my death.
So hold me now, before I'm gone.
Mine is yours in memory; drawn. 

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Rialb_327
Rialb_327
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132 days ago    Reply
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once again, young and confused, but i like this one.
 
Tippi123
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123 days ago    Reply
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I like this one too. It's direct to the point and really good and easy to follow
 
ilu
ilu
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117 days ago    Reply
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I love this one
 


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