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Unable to sleep

I didn't sleep well last night
I didn't dream last night
Losing all the battles
Losing all my fight

I didn't sleep well last night
Barely closed my eyes
tossed and turned and paced
until sunrise

I didn't dream last night
Any time I tried
I cried inside
and wanted to run and hide

I didn't sleep well last night
My world seems confused
Like a dead-end in a maze
like an ocean without a sky

All my friends are far away
the hands I hold are imagined
my life in shades of blue and grey
A life derailed and gone astray

I didn't dream last night
All my dreams feel broken
Hardly uttered or spoken
my tears have run dry

I didn't sleep at all last night
caught up in dispair
for all the things not right
not all black and white

I didn't dream last night
my heart is ablaze
with sadness and fright
No way to make things right

I didn't sleep at all last night
My ship must have sailed away
All I can do is pray
but I've forgotten why

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ayie
ayie
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hmm its so sad, full of emotions, just let go and dont lose hope...
 
pink_sj
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thats really sad for me to read cuz i know its not just a poem.the end is no were near so chin up and get ur spirit back
 
bluerain109
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just let go of sad thought and turn your mind into bright side..not easy but we all must do it too to come on our way :)
 
Roselia
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your sadness is evident in this. You hold onto these emotions that bury you under and leave you trapped in your own purgatory. You write with such conviction and the loss expressed in this, breaks my heart. I know it's hard but letting go will relieve you in more ways than I can say.

I hope you mend well.
 
Bluerose7706
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Roselia is right...Move on and don't lose hope...
 


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