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By kellyvs
11.04.2008
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Love Poems
phone message


	Beep beep goes the phone as a message is recived i wounder if it is u the man from my dreams The one i think about every second of the day the one i never want to go away Is it just a message to say "how be" or the one i ve been waiting to see saying "your the one for me" It is not your name i see as i pick upthe phone my heart skips a beat as i feel so alone maybe one day it will be the message i long to see.

Cazzy

183 days ago Reply

I fell you totally...
Exactly why I neve, ever use my cell on the spaceship!

Peace

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Cazzy
The Alien Bluez Dude

ujjwal

182 days ago Reply

VERY NICE FRESH REFRESHING POETRY........the title dream man sounds a bit 1 of those old fashioned stuff....bt its simply great. its simplicity at its very best. the the way u used phone is superb. very nice thought..i loved it.

Forsaken66

155 days ago Reply

I agree with ujjwal. It's a reat poem. nicel done. I like it.

JackEpsn1

155 days ago Reply

Nice poems.

pirate151

91 days ago Reply

I LOVE IT ..

Muhammad Shanazar

41 days ago Reply

The poetess depics very beautifully the prolonged tension through which a discarded and heartbroken lover passes. Nice tone and nice diction.
Shanazar

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