You are a wonderful poet, you should use your wonderful talent on something that is not offensive to us who believe in heaven God and the likes...

Great poem, ignore the close-minded ones.

im sorry but i think this peom is really stupid...if you dont belive in god or heaven then what happens when you die....all most people have is looking foward to seeing thier loved ones when they die and stipud people like you have to ruin that thought.

Wow that was a the most absurd comment I have ever read. And for those who dont believe in faith? Or your ideals of heaven and hell? Those who have no friends or family....what about them? Are we to limit our ingenuity to your liking. It's time to learn a thing or two! Stupid was kinda a ridiculous who are you to judge anyone or anything. What make your dislike for this any better then this poem. This site sure as hell isn't a place to express your opinion about anyone intellects with no idea of who they are in real life. Lets see what you write about after this, you'll get real honest opinions too. I want to see what are real poet writes about.

Just remember I write this way, not act this way, in reality I am a very laid back person.I am very proud of my writing and if I write anything to offend you then i am sorry.