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Sloshua

 

The person you make me


It’s everything you’d teach Me


Has me wondering


If these intentions


Start to mention


Merciless words thrown together


Dust collects on the surface


Is my heart something you don’t use anymore


Something you don’t Have any use for…


Wait now


something just isn’t right


My heart on the inside


Locked down tight


No not I


Not even I can get within


There’s no telling what I’ve felt


No idea what its lets in


I don’t want to fall away


So polish off the surface


Pretend everything is okay


You make I


I don’t know what I am


I is not me


But I is who you make me


I’ve lost all recognition


Of this movement


Of this beat


An inside infection


Bringing defeat


I inhale the deepest breath of you


Pulling poison through


Like ivy fire


Through veins’ desire


To carry on


Quick and uncontrolled


I take over


Slow and unnoticed


What is happening to me


Something you’d never see


A hold on me


I take in the sharpest pain


Razors name


Signed yours truly


Lips blue freeze


Bringing ease


And teasing those who correct me


I take over


And look to you


But you go walking through


Me and I alone


Locked outside


In this heartless home


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 

 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 

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Well that was about Poetically despondent to say the least.

Regardless, I must still dole out me assessment fer yer.

Hmm, I see this verse is sad, tragic, and hopeless

Check, check, check...

Yup, sounds juss like yer.

Okay then, everything seems to be in order here


Carry on

'Anna

By the way, it was also a wonderful read
 


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