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The mess

Let's listen to what everyone says,
Or let's fix this mess.
You are too amazing to lose,
But you made me choose.
What's the point to sit here and fight,
We still have plenty of time to make this right.
I obviously made a mistake,
We can try and give this another take.
You look at me with such major hate,
We can no longer date.
It's over I guess,
Boy, what a mess.

This is one of my worst poems I've written, I wrote this quite a long time ago. The only reason I submitted it is because it shows that you shouldn't give up if you think it's love. I however, had to give up.
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