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The Summer Carnival

A fire alights in my hand
Swift and strong it stands
As I move down your neck
Clouds of delicious poison
Swirl in windy wonder
As the light hits your dress
A sense of wonder hits your eyes
The color jumps from corners and bins
Interest sparks your smile
To a flow of greenish shade
Ebbs and flows of people
People with bags and boxes
They move as we kiss
About and around us
We stand here taking it in
The sights, the sounds, the love
Tracking desires amidst the night air
And disappear into a back alley
Your face shines under neon lights
Traces of gold in your smile
Offset glances causing highs
Unknown strings of symphonies
Dances with wolves with shoes
Sex exudes from the mist
Midnight air fills my mind
And my soul

My patience wears thin
And I am in

God you're beautiful

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JungleJim
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I get it...you were holding your johnson near the funhouse and falling in love with strangers again but you got caught looking and she smiled nervously as you imagined porking her in public. Nice write! Next: Mall of America!

Now, the "Dances with Wolves with shoes" (you'd better explain that part....). I'm guessing Indian Squa chick"
 
Zach B
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Almost. But a good guess though. And dances with wolves with shoes was me and the ladyfriend watching some a don juan guy try to seduce a girl way too young for him.
 
JungleJim
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But she was closer to your age and you were imagining dancing with her....
Excellent!!! Screw the Don Wrong guy she's your girl!
 


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