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Suicidal....

Where were you,
Daddy,
When I saw my mother cry?

Where were you,
Mommy,
when I saw my best friend die?

Where were you,
Brother,
When I needed you the most?

Where were you,
Sister,
When I had lost all hope?

Where was everyone,
I trusted the most,

They were nowhere to be found,
Once I hung from the rope.

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DepressedDani
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222 days ago    Reply
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ouch!!
That's quite harsh 2 ur family.. I bet they really love u
but it makes great poetry :)
loved it x
 
brokenhere
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222 days ago    Reply
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wow dude, i know you well enough i think that its not so much about you but about the people who are close enough to see the signs and dont.... but seriously powerful stuff
 
Football18
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222 days ago    Reply
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... wow.
ive had two friends go through this...
... sorry.
i hope no one did this to you...
it hurts... trust me i know.
My best friends birthday is the 16th... and im going to visit his gramma.
im sorry.
 
chulila
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221 days ago    Reply
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hey...thats deep... brutal
 
JimGlunje
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221 days ago    Reply
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Vindictive! Usually when we lash out so harsly at other its a sign of being spoiled rotten and I should know!! 10 bucks..you would be haning with one eye open to see if anyone noticed. My Jim used to say "wake up and smell the coffee" or "what you need is a good kick in the ass"....and you know what....he was right. People can only help so much anyway...We have to work some things out ourselves. Now hate me!!...right??
 
JimGlunje
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221 days ago    Reply
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Sorry if you lost a friendthat's KNOT Funny! If you were close...remember the good times and be glad you had a chance to share them when you did.
 
lovingyou
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220 days ago    Reply
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that is very true..
 
Ez22
Ez22
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220 days ago    Reply
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I think like that every day...
good job though..
 
Rose9998
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210 days ago    Reply
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Your poem hits home, like when I lost my brother. Each of us greive in our own way. When the pain comes, you have to seek someone to talk to. People sometimes feel you may just want to be left alone, but that is not always true.
 


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