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Steps to The Sky

It starts with a glance Getting lost in those eyes
Both of them sprakle like a million sunny blue skies
It moves to her reaction the way she looks back
The way you take a second stare and lose time and track
Next is the rythm in my heart how it picks up 20,000 beats
And how the sky falls around us now im waiting on the edge of my seat
Now we start talking til its practically morning again
It seems like luck is on my side and every day is a win
Then friday comes i wake up as the day shines its light
School flies by I'm waiting for the endless weekend night
To see her face without worrying about a thing in this troubled world would make my life ok
So i'll work up my confidence and get my head on straight ill ask her out and it will make my day
With hope she'll say yes she will grab my hand and my veins will pulse with light
My eyes will light up like A golden lightning strike bright as her eyes
One day with her is all i need before i say goodbye

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tornheartsneverheal
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One night with her is all I need before I say goodbye...
I love that line. Superb job.thumbs up
 
jb1550
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ahhh sweeet sweeet relief i didnt have a positive look on this one
 
tornheartsneverheal
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Why the hell not??? Your the writer.if you have no confidence in your work,people will absolutely terrorize you about it.believe this,I know
 
jb1550
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i just was so unsure about it but is it good?
 


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