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Rhyming free verse poem.

When I woke up this morning
I never knew the day would be boring.
And without you in my site,
It's lonliness, that I just can't fight.

I can't fight this feeling, that I've hid for too long.
It just won't leave, and it just feels too wrong.
I know you'd say that you do,
And I hope that it's really true.......but

I'm scared that you don't love me,
and scared that you'd never want to be.
Please tell me--honestly--that you really do,
and assure me that you really want to.

I really love you and I'd never leave your side.
Because you make my world seem long and wide.
It makes me happy, and makes me feel good.
But on the inside, my heart feels of raw wood.

Scared. Sad. And worried that your going to leave.
So make me complete and make me believe
That you'll always be there and always be true.
.................................................. .
You didn't say you love me, but I hope that you do.

 

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Rialb_327
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yes, i was young when i wrote this. so bear with it.
 
Tippi123
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This is really good
 
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very good
 


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