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Roselie Laurentia

 

To you know who

It's hard to let go
when all I want to do
is hold onto you

Every day I wake
with you on mind
in my heart
on my soul
your every where I go

how can I say goodbye
when everything
points to you?
everything good
happens when Im
with you?

Your words caress
my heart
lift me so high
you may as well
have given me wings
my hope burns fiercer
cause of you
I'm comfortable with you
Im me, when Im with you.

That you understand me
better than anyone I know
makes it harder for me to say goodbye

You affect me so much
leave me senseless
longing for you
it drives me mad
cause you make me whole

Crazy right?

however warped out that is
it's true
it's not some phase
of lust or infatuation

it's merely my heart
wanting you
I can't help the way I feel
any more than you can

So there's no elaborate
story here,
no fairy tale ending
just me letting you know
that I love you

I dream of you 
imagine your hand in mine
our hearts entwined.
You hold my light in your hands
and yet you belong with her
i know it, you know it
so why can't my thoughts just change
rearrange themselves
so I don't feel like an idiot
for loving you

Your my perfect dream
way over on the other side
of that creek.

Perfectly imperfect we are
so perfect my hearts bleeding.


Written by Roselia

Modified 24.9.8 - changed the title coz I didn't like it. It didn't fit...the way I wanted it too anyway. Formely titled Perfection.

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brokenhere
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wow.... its all i can say... i know this one, i know the meaning... and i just have to say... wow
 
Roselia
Roselia
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lol drew you always say wow! .. I guess it's a good thing though eh?
Thanks mate.. It's good that you get it.. Im still reeling from it! lol
 
Football18
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if this is true... than im so sorry. to love someone-- and see them with someone else-- and know theyre happy... im so sorry.
this poem is amazing, and i really love it.!! <3
 
Football18
Football18
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its just hard to know it comes at ones expense
 
Roselia
Roselia
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eh chicky, it's okay.. Im all good. Just needed to write this. Sort out my thoughts and all.. He's a brilliant guy. No need to be sorry.

Thanks for your comment though. I appreciate it!

Take it easy k
 
OndreHarris1
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Your poem is brilliant, he is not. This guy sound like a fairy tale, and in reality he become nothing more than a proverb.
 
Roselia
Roselia
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nah he's pretty brilliant Ondre. lol. And he is my little fairy tale. Oh well..

That's why I dream aye.
 
OndreHarris1
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Dreaming is wonderful thing because it truly takes you to places and love that no one could ever imagine, so it is wonderful that you allow us to dream with you. :)
 
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Roselia,
This is a awesome poem. I am kinda going through this situation myself...
 
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It's perfect, and touches me deep
First thing in the morning, when I hear you speak
And last thing at night as you bid me sweet dreams
The brush of your lips lets me know what you mean

And all of the hours that pass through the day
Those spent together and when you're away
I think of you always, imagine your touch
Think how to show you, I love you so much

So when we're apart, and you long for me near
Just try to remember, you're already here
For deep in my heart, where no one can see
You'll be forever, together we'll be

love_av_rock@yahoo.com
 


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