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Pain

I don’t want you to get angry
to be cut off from the world
feel like no one is here for you
because really
I am the only one.

You have to help others
in order to help yourself.

You just have to be considerate
so to be considerate
consider this,
for every single time we fight
you hurt that on single person you love.

So what I am saying is
you rip out their heart and
you stab it with a knife.
Now the pain they felt before isn’t half as bad as it is now.
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sammay
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hey i'm new to this whole thing but i found your poem really touching and realistic. GOOD WORK!
 
Sweetsinner
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wow thats real deep,
good work, keep it up
 


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