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Painted This

Painted This



 


 


 


 If she gives you


Perhaps a view


To look into


 


What’s left within


Her painted truth


In any sense


You just might sense


How senselessness


Her own defense


 


Has


In a sense


Died


A senseless


Death


With every breath


 


Aye, waste of grace


Touch her hand
Not her face


Feel her brow


What was there


Though nothing now


Has still learned how


 


Her lame disguise


Of make-up lies


That still denies


Her made up lies


Are covered up blame


Of her secret shame


 That marks up the face


Of our wasted grace


Takes many low blows


When over-blown egos


Again comes to blows


 


Few understand


A striking hand


With steady stare


Has shifted her there


 


On the edge somewhere


Some when, some how


Right there, lost in mind


Half here and half-blind


Finds her semi-self


In the poorest of health


 


So blowing her a kiss


She won’t even know


But may well know this


 


She always won’t miss


Any of this
Manipulative shit


 One single bit


 


 

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Roselia
Roselia
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Very Clever Anna.

I love this! This is oh so very awesome. I was drawn the whole time and love the approach/perspective. Quite out of this world really, my kind of thing!

Take Care

Roselie
 
Roselia
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I read this back & something clicked. I must've misinterpreted it's meaning, but now, I'm left feeling sad. You truly are remarkable, I hope you mend well, in this life or the next.

Roselie
 
foxey_rachael
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IT WAS VERY GOO I LOVED IT
 
Josh Wolski
Josh Wolski
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Yeah this was an amazing poem. reminded me of a song by Creed,

"She wears a coat of color, loved by some, feared by others, she's immortalized in a young mans eyes"

Great poem yer got there
 


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