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No feeling

When I lost him
my heart went with him
and therefore
I have no feeling

The days go by
and I float on air
because he left me
with no feeling

I try to hurt
but the pain is gone
and it's all because
I have no feeling

I try to cry
but the tears wont come
I have lost it all
with no feeling

I like it this way
It feels much better
its not too bad
when you have no feeling

You are numb
nothing can hurt you
and you learn to live
with no feeling
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SarahLorraine
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well, personally, I really like this poem. I guess some people may not know what it's like to be hurt that bad. Great job!
 
Trevathan
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I would love to live with no feeling i like your poem and i give you your prompts for being able to erase pain and live with no feeling
 


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