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My hurt

This is just a rough draft I wrote it all off the top of my head.

I never expected this would be love
I wasn't open to the idea
I was so wrong that now i wish i wasn't
We clicked so well
We fell just as hard as eachother
You told me you loved me
I was affraid but i felt the same
We smiled
We laughed
We played around


Then suddenly everything changed
I felt alone
I didn't know what you wanted
Me, her or no one
I cried
I obsessed over it
I pushed too hard and I lost you


You never said it was over
why?
You said you loved me so quick
but ran away even quicker.

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you wrote this?
it's excellent ;]
 


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