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My Sweetest Angel

I see you face in a shimmering light
That makes your face glow in the darkest night
My heart is beating louder like I was holding my breath
I wasn’t sure if I was close to me death
It was the way you look, so magnificent and determine
I have to look away or I would faint from your perfection,
But I couldn’t. Your eyes is what making me refuse to look away
Even though your eyes are like mine in every way,
But your eyes is what cause my heart to freeze
And yes it’s true because I can no longer hear it beat
I get so weak even though I am strong
When you reveal your body I can’t hold my balance for long
Sometime I wish that u would stop staring into my eyes
Because I struggle not to pass out in front of your eyes
But I remember I did that, and I was in your arms
I fainted when you dazzled me by your charms
And when u kissed me I could hear heavenly bell ring
Oh my sweetest angel with your glorious wing
Fly back to the heaven, oh hurry please
And thank you for everything, now your heart and spirit is within me

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morninglight
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What you wrote is very innocent and beautiful. Wish life was more like that.
 
bri1234
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nice work !!!!
 
BrianneDH
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Wow! This is really beautiful!! I love it! Good job.
 


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