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My Part.

I cant be with you and i cant love anyone else,
I cant go foward and and i cant go back,
I`m stuck here, nowhere,
Rehearsing a script i`m to learn that`ll help me move on,
It`s a well known script that many have learnt,
It`s supposed to be helpfull for those who`ve been burnt.
If my performance seems lacking or missing some soul,
It`s quite simple really,
I don`t believe in the role.
If one day we meet,
If i`m playing this part,
I know when our eyes meet you`ll see through me,
Straight through to my heart.
I cant be with you, i can`t love anyone else,
Im just stuck in this part,
A part for everyone else.

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greeneyedgirl
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Your poems are great, you have a knack with emotion, if they are derived from your own experience then I pitty the women that put the pain in your heart, she had a star from the sky but she gave up her wish..
 
Leif
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Thanks, and yes, they are derived from my own experience, writing about it seems to be the only thing that helps, its like a form of self therapy. Thanks again for your comments.
 
Robin Brown
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WOW! I love the poets here! You've got f*ckin talent! Keep up the wrk so I'll have something good to read when I have one of my MANY bored moments haha
 
babigirl27
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wow ur poetry is amazing..... i have the same feelings that u have about this guy and we just got into a huge fight..... and ive realized that ive got to figure out some way to move on its not worth the pain
 
mfinney
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very nice leif. i do believe we have both been through some very similar experiences. keep at it brother.
 
Leif
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After reading your work, i believe your right
 


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