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My Demon Venus

The temptress, seductress, queen of beauty,
A fiery goddess, yet majestic and graceful.
She carries a Venus aura under her wings,
Radiating it; as powerful as the burning sun.
A demon of sorts dancing through my mind,
Ranting and raving things in my head.
Eyes set to kill as she knows what she wants,
She gives me a look, a tease, a sample.
The alarm bells ring of a siren's song,
I’m left addicted and hungering for more.
The forbidden fruit, the devil's water, sweet,
I’m left tumbling into oblivion, intoxicated.
Damned for all eternity, a curse to bear,
How can I resist melting over such a woman?
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sexymoonfairy
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This poem is awsome! It rocks! Your good.
 
muse
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well that is one of the best poems that i have ever read, it is so eloquent, and lovely, i can almost feel your strife. superb poem!!! keep up the lovely work--MUSE
 
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Sweet Mother of Crap! The was wonderful!Your so talented.
Such a use of words. Beautiful!~HiddenSocks
 
miserablebabygirl
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I agree with them. Your choice of words are correctly used in this poem and the way you write is incredible!!! Keep up the great poetry!!!-miserable baby girl
 


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