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My Cry..

Dont cry...dont cry..there is nothing more you can do.."why cry" i ask myself..."why shouldnt i".."i dont think i can"..but why..it hurts..it burns like a midnight sky..dark and lonely...but beautiful in flight..it creeps on me like the morning sun..piercing my comfort sleep..i cant wake up...my eyes..they are dry..my cry where are you?..i need you..why wont you come...
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Trevathan
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i like your poem but please realize you don't need anyone you can make it on your own
 


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