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Metamorphisis in A Aching World

My hands lay shaken stuck in a beat
Tick Tock fills my head it seems ends cannot meet
The movement of time seems to be stuck in place
As i search the world i quicken my pace
The writers touch seems to make things feel gone
But in the end i feel like just waiting for dawn
Pressure builds up i feel the wind
They are quickly changing and start to spin
I collide with the ground face coming first
My head turns to the side i feel the earth
I grasp the pain the mercy in the world
I feel myself lose it my head begins a swirl
I'm stuck in a roundabout things start to repeat
I feel it all ends weren't meant to meet
They were meant to go and travel away
Not seeing each other again til the very last day
When they meet chaos seems to bottle up inside
For now all have seen this long gruesome ride
This ride is life you are stuck til the end
And don't think you have all time to spend
Life ends as fast as life can start
So claim your glory and make your mark
Make it wide make it new
For that is the only way the world sees you

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Justpassingthrough
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Nice poem. Life is full of ups and downs and it goes by as fast as you say. More important than the way the world sees you is that you keep your heart and try to find some meaning in things as you go along. Sometimes your mark is made in little ways and they seem not to matter...but one day perhaps they will.......have faith!
 
jb1550
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i know that line all too well but down seems a little bit more reliable than the ups
 
Justpassingthrough
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I'll be perfectly blut with you.....life can get even harder. I'm no just giving a pep talk or repeating the party line. You're just 19!

Enjoy being 19

If you wish, write me. I'll try my best to guide you out of it. It might not help but you never know...it might.
 
jb1550
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even worse im only 15
 
Justpassingthrough
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15
You're grown up for 15
Whatever is hurting you, you can take more control of your life
Find acceptance for the things you can't change...like family
Find forgiveness to replace anger and resentment

15 is the age to learn to be more responsible for yourself and to realize life is opening up a bit more....even though it's feeling a little closed to you at the moment. That's not true.....there is a world of possibility!
Here's some things you can to for yourself:
1) choose your friends wisely, (insist on caring people)
2) Don't worry about popularity
3) Work on your physical conditioning...your body must last a long time so you have to take care of it..it helps your outlook too
4) keep learning...find joy in learning new things
5) Find something you're passionate about
6) Count your blessings
7) Do something nice for someone
8) Be helpful to your parents and forgive them for their failings
9) Realize that life is a struggle and stay positive and strong
10) When you fall, pick yourself up and try again
11) If you feel alone...ask God in....he'll always be there to call upon if your faith is waning
12) Enjoy being 15....but remember 15 is just the very beginning and there are many happy things ahead. There will be moments of lonliness, sadness, pain, heartbreak but there will also be greater meaning, moments of sharing, joy, happiness.
13) Try something completely different now and then
14) Cut out things that are negative or are distractions
15) Don't get caught up on dating now....There is time for that later

Enjoy being 15.....You're a young man now with a future ahead....you just need to prepare for it now. Take contol but let your heart guide you in all things. Stay away from drugs and alcohol (These things never do any good). Life is best lived with eyes clear and senses alert.

Hope this is helpful advice! When in doubt.....pray!
 
jb1550
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you have a amazing way to make peoples days bc tht did help thank you
 
Justpassingthrough
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You're welcome! Thanks for letting me know it was helpful.
 
tornheartsneverheal
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Gdi, your making me feel worthless joey.stoppett.lol
Amazing as always....
What inspired this one?
 
jb1550
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not sure really jsut an outlet of cluttered thoughts really
 


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