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Let It End

He doesn't need a door to shut her out anymore
She doesn't try to reach him
It can never be like it was before

"I love you"
But the words ring in a hollow shell
And the eyes don't connect
Whatever happened who can tell

Time no longer spent together
Interest no longer sparked
Who was the one to let the feelings wither?
How have they grown so far apart?

He doesn't need her by his side
He wants to be alone
So she sits in a corner but there's nowhere to hide
From the man no longer her own

She wonders who he thinks of at night
And hurts that he could love another
With a mile between they lay together
This was supposed to last forever
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AngelGoddess
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omg I know how that feels OMG I'm just so glad I found my soulmate and were together now but I feel for you!
 
Josh Wolski
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This is good. Really good. The structure of verses is so perfect for this idea. Nice writing thank you.
 


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