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Just simple is fine with me....

You can throw out all the accoutrements
and all the trappings, frills, and lingere
all the chocolates, valentines and compliments
just give me your soft hand to forever hold


 


You can throw out all the lace
all the satin and all the pillows
all the make-up, frill, curls and bows
just give me a warm caress to ease my woes


 


You can throw out all the seduction
and can skip the formal introduction
Just feel my firm hands on your soft hips
and the warm touch of your lucious lips


 


And if you should see me crying
in a moment of pause unepectedly
come sit silently next to me
and I'll notice that for me you're trying


 


I'm not much for courtship and  romance
except what's real and pure
but somehow just your loving feminine sensuality
Just to be near in simplicity would feel like a gentle cure


 


 

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You’re not into courtship and romance
However do you plan to land this gal?

Throw away the frills, her sexy lingerie the chocolates
all the valentines and compliments?

Throw away her lace and satin pillows?
The makeup, the frills and curls and bows?

Throw away her teasing introductions and
Her sexy seduction?

Gezzz why would you ever throw all of this away?
I guess that’s a man for ya…he cuts to the chase!

A women would feel simply” a piece a meat”
She needs to SHOW her Feminine Sensuality
And ALL of this…takes her there…it “PUTS” her in the “mood”

Happy Valentines to you…and May you PLAN on doing more this year…best wishes
 
JungleJim
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Oh well....
 
Encourager
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what I meant was...sigh....women need attetion before the lights go out...
They need a building up into the night...Nice poem...
 
Encourager
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I FOUND IT!!!
I KNEW THIS WAS A POETIC FORM...IT IS CALLED REDONDILLA QUATRAIN POEM!!

Redondilla- this is a Spanish form written in tetrameter with any of three rhyme schemes: "abba", "abab" or "aabb".
 
JungleJim
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You mean I'm a poet.....and I didn't even know it??
 
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I thought again about what you said about women needing attention before the lights go out. Alas, I've forgotten all about romance and have just remembered about love....which flow like water and needs no coaxing when felt and shared. Such a dreamer I am!
 


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