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If I keep holding on...

If I keep holding on
It will be clear in time
Its so hard to believe
Yesterday you were mine
Today I'll just grieve
Tomorrow I won't feel
My pain just might kill
My soul has new fears
My thoughts overfill
My life stained with tears
My mind knows your gone
My heart feels you near

My spirit keeps holding on...

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Raconteur
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Hmm, Paramour, what yer got goin' on here with yer persona 'eh?

Are yer an advocate fer 'The more you suffer, the more it shows you really care'? or are you some kind of Poetic masochist?

I'll leave the rehtoric option regarding my inquiry entirely up to you.

As it enables me save social grace, as well as dismissing you from any issues you may have concerning candidness that you may find yourself contending with.

Your Poem is sad, but that's what makes it beautiful in my eyes.

I hope you mend well, if that's what it is you desire.
If not, I'm sure you know the results that your martyrdom's aftermath holds.

Either way, best of luck to you.

Take care,

'Anna
 
Qjones
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this poem was so graphic almost as it I was watching someone go through the same thing ....this a wonderful poem ...the comment above says that it is a sad poem but I resent that I feel as if it is doing nothing but explaining some of the things that everyone goes through from time to time....ITS CALLED LIFE
 
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Check me out and give me a comment of what you think my name is Qjones and My tag is Love the name of the poem is Within
 


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