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By Kadelyn
18.08.2007
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	I wish you Never said forever. And Never say you didnt lie You dont know what forever is, and you deffintally lied once because, last time i checked, forever lasts longer than this. I wish you never said i love you And i wish you never said you didnt lie because you dont know what love is and now this is lie number two I wish you knew that love is forever. And if you "love" me you wouldnt of left. I wish you never said forever And i wish you never said love because then,i could go a day without crying and last time i checked these are tears that are running down my cheek. I wish we felt the same, And i wish we didnt have to end You dont know how this feels Because last time i checked your not the one thats crushed.

zxzNiOm

470 days ago Reply

I really enjoyed reading your poem lady Kadelyn. It reminded me of the bastards who dwell on this earth. I truthfully know and understand your sorrow. The only advise I can give is to never to forget and learn from your mistakes!

zxzNiOm

470 days ago Reply

Your poem does however lack of minor grammar and structure, but this brings your poem into perfection! It gives its touch! It gives its reality! A true masterpiece from the heart. Thank you for sharing, I am zxzNiOm*,.

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