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I thought I saw a tear drop

He said that I was beautiful

My heart stopped

1...2...3...4...5....

Seconds passed me by
frozen in time
his words lingering in the air

I couldn't breathe
Couldn't move
Just stare

He was beautiful
Sweet, caring
Respectful

I gulped down air
as my heart restarted
his touch on my skin
was electric

I wanted him to kiss me
Take me in his arms
and show me love

But he hesitated
so I turned away.

Ashamed even

It was only when he
wrapped me in his arms
and whispered in my ears, softly
'I thought I saw a tear drop'

that I realised I was crying..

Written by Roselie 2008


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babiigurl
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hey there is a boy at my school that said u didn't want non of this
 
Roselia
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69 days ago  
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Pardon? Sorry I don't understand..
 
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shanard
 
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hey, wow roselie its been a while since i got on here, but omg this one is AMAZING!!! god you have talent!
 
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is that the end? or there's more.
 


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