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I Felt You

Letters unanswered
guess you don't see me as real
as I see you
thought you needed someone
to help you get through
It hurts to be disregarded
discarded
when I saw good in you
and tried to lend a helping hand
to sit down, to be someone to you
But now I know you don't need a friend
guess I know that's true
You didn't really see me at all
or feel me
but I felt you
It hurts somehow I confide
to see another hurting, so
I open my heart wide
but even though I tried
I feel the hurt
and emptiness inside
Guess I said enough
I never knew it could feel so rough
I was just passing through
but along the way, you were someone
I'm pretty sure it meant something too
But I'm not sure what it is
but only know this is true:
I felt you
I don't like goodbyes
but I know, I must go
but will still think of you
if you recall, you'll know its true
you weren't invisible to me
you were a real person, I know
I couldn't help but to care
though it was suicide
kindness; I tried
my fate now... I feel so blue
You say nobody knows you
That may be true, but
strangers now
We'll run and hide
But know inside, I tried
whenever you cried
I felt you

©  James T. Adair

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Applesandkeys
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I like this one ..especially this part

It hurts somehow I confide
to see another hurting, so
I open my heart wide
but even though I tried
I feel the hurt
and emptiness inside

been there once. .. The ending was ...well messed up ...not really an ending i guess either ...still a story ...anyway ...nice one ...keep at it !!!!
 
catanduanes
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jim,
this one is really touching,.
i just want you to know that im always here
eventhough that i havent been online for sometime
coz of my work schedule,.
but i want you to know that youve got a friend in me,.
 
Justpassingthrough
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Sadness and heartbreak are great teachers. They have taught me to see the greatest beauty in the hearts of others. When one feels discarded and falls among flowers he more readily sees their true beauty..... and that they have taken him in....they now remain forever in his heart.
 
cactusinoasis
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..Don't feel sad...Friends are like star..u can't see them always but for sure they're always around...Keep on doing good....
 
Justpassingthrough
Justpassingthrough
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Thank you!
 
kellyvs
kellyvs
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i will allways be here for u xxxx
 
Justpassingthrough
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I know Kelly, the feeling is mutual. You helpled me to rediscover the true meaning of caring and helped my heart to open up. I've found the world is connected in ways I never knew. The day I found a friend was the day I opened my heart wide to care. Now I've found care is something real. It isn't always spoken, it's not always shared, it's not always physical but we take it with us as a treasure. Caring is felt in the heart and soul and those who longed for and suffered without it know best it's true meaning.
 


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