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How Does it Feel

How does it feel
Seeing the face
Of someone you once loved
Someone who once loved you
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How does it feel
Seeing her lying in a pool
A pool of blood, sweat, and tears

How does it feel
Seeing her wrist and
That razor blade
Seeing all of that blood

How does it feel
Reading that letter
The letter she wrote
Telling you she cant go on

How does it feel
Knowing shes gone
Knowing it was you that killed her
Do you feel anything

How does it feel
Watching as they take her body away
Did they carry it gently?
Did you show them the letter?

How does it feel
Knowing
Seeing
Feeling
Believeing
Everything she ever did
Was for you

Now shes dead
Cut too deep and it was all for you
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miserablebabygirl
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I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!
 
Lainey
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Hey I'm glad that u love my pome I have many more that I will put up wen the time is rite. That pome is prolly about amonth old but so far I have written 50 pomes I hope to write more but they havn't been comeing to me as the first ones did. I hope to hear from u some other time.
 
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I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!
 
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I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!
 
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I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!
 
babigirl27
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wow that poem is realli good and horrible at the same time.... amazing writing.... horrible memory of me when i was at that point..... keep writitng though uve got an amazing ability
 


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