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How Does it Feel

By Lainey
10.12.2006
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	How does it feel Seeing the face Of someone you once loved Someone who once loved you ... How does it feel Seeing her lying in a pool A pool of blood, sweat, and tears How does it feel Seeing her wrist and That razor blade Seeing all of that blood How does it feel Reading that letter The letter she wrote Telling you she cant go on How does it feel Knowing shes gone Knowing it was you that killed her Do you feel anything How does it feel Watching as they take her body away Did they carry it gently? Did you show them the letter? How does it feel Knowing Seeing Feeling Believeing Everything she ever did Was for you Now shes dead Cut too deep and it was all for you

miserablebabygirl

757 days ago Reply

I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!

Lainey

753 days ago

Hey I'm glad that u love my pome I have many more that I will put up wen the time is rite. That pome is prolly about amonth old but so far I have written 50 pomes I hope to write more but they havn't been comeing to me as the first ones did. I hope to hear from u some other time.

miserablebabygirl

757 days ago Reply

I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!

miserablebabygirl

757 days ago Reply

I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!

miserablebabygirl

757 days ago Reply

I love your poem. It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!

babigirl27

608 days ago Reply

wow that poem is realli good and horrible at the same time.... amazing writing.... horrible memory of me when i was at that point..... keep writitng though uve got an amazing ability

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