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Holding on to what is gone....

I keep holding on to something
I never had the chance to grasp
I find myself ripping out my heart
To lessen the painful wrath

I've tried to walk beside you
Through thick, thin, black, gray
I thought someday you'd see me
But you kept pushing me away

Now you're angry that I'm going
You're upset now that I'm through
You keep pointing the finger at me
When it should be turned to you

We've both made our mistakes
And somehow through all of this
You call me "Selfish".

Now I know you just used me
Tossing me when I wasn't convenient
Picking me up when you were lonely
But I'm tired of that treatment

You and I used to have an "us"
I got thrown overboard by the swells
Tossed in with rolling thunder
Caught in the unbreakable spells

You and I don't stand a chance
When fate's not on our side
You and I won't make it through
What's inevitable can't be denied.

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morninglight
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It sounds like both are very hurt by this. You sounded like you were abandoned in the last poem. In this poem he sounds like he's being abandoned by you. Both are seeking to blame the other and it's very sad to read. Why is fate not on your side? I wondered about that line? Often the reason relationships fall apart is lack of communication. Sure you can't save it?
Sometimes a relationship can grow stronger if both care enough about each other.
 
SweetestSin
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sometimes....... :(
 
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Straight to the point. I felt that here.
 


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