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Her Suicide Story

What conspired in her eyes that night


Fingers like handle grips


And nails like razor tips


 


I swear you would have never thought she’d of stopped


 


Tranquil luster


Let it gleam


Pouring down wards


Arms with seams


 


Where does the pain begin


Further underneath her skin


 


You would have swore you’d never seen it coming


 


In questioned thought


She doesn’t know


How all the pain


Just let’s go


 


For her demise


Must understand


That its fate too


Is in her hands


 


But what did it all mean anyways


 


A just escape


From lonely days


Of hollow thoughts


On paths astray


 


Just follow through


A layer; few


And close your eyes


It settles you


 


And trust me,


You would have believed her if she told you


 


A solemn way that she chases


But no longer runs


Because the victim can wait


If she’s the only one


 


It brings out the heavens


It feels like a dream


It makes days normal


When it falls from these seams


 


At her time there was nothing to say


In time she just faded away


 


You could feel it if you closed your eyes


 


Away…


 


Not completely


But of course physically


 


Lifted,,,


Away now angel off you go!

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Josh Wolski
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HA HA! Theres that touch. That feels good right there folks.
 
pink_sj
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that is fooking amazing lol wow wow wow.
ahhhwwww,i felt somethin when reading that.i really love ur talent
 
Josh Wolski
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If you like this. you should honestly read some of my earlier work. That stuff is good. I give you my word.
 
Jennifer1
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One word... WOW!
 


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