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Her Fate

She trys on her jeans but there to tight,
she trys to zip them up with a tuff long fight

She stares at herself in the mirror with a horrible hate,
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But she bows her head knowing this was her fate

Her tummy has been getting bigger,
Sometimes she thought of pulling the trigger

She trys to stay strong,
hopeing this will all move along

rubbing her tummy she can feel her heart beat,
Sometimes she can feel her tiny little feet

she lays in her bed without him to hold,
He was never going to come back is what she was told

Heres a 16 year old girl loosing her life,
Now she will always be pressed againest the knife

But this is her mistake she choicen to choose,
Now everything she had before she will loose.



written by:AsHlEy

Modified by Pashley3388

Modified by Pashley3388

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liljd78
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THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD.
HOW DID YOU THINK OF THIS?
E-MAIL ME @ liljd78@yahoo.com thank you
 
Pollyanna
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This is good..I got your friendship offer..thanks. I got married when I was your age..it's good to have an outlet like this when you are so mature at that age...I bet you feel like most people your age just don't GET it...well good luck with your book, I'd like to know more about it..
 
Pashley3388
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thnxs for the comment.so u got married at 14 tht must of been hard.Id love to tell u about the book if u wld like.

-ashley
 
princemolko
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Hey i really hope all goes well with the book you are writing. make sure you let me know when it is published cause I knwoit will get published. I want a copy lol. youa re 14. thats awsome, some of the best books can be made with the mind of an intelligent 14 yo likeyou.Keep up the good work.
 


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