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He*She

She walks he waits
He remembers every single one of her traits
She smiles but is broken
He feels as if his heart has not yet spoken
She takes a new guy a new soul
His head hurts as if his mind is out of control
Her eyes cry regret
His heart is in debt
She stays with one but wants another
His heart and head is a wreckless clutter
She walks by her heart skips a spot
He sees her his hearts in a knot
She notices him standing but doesnt make a move
He feels like leaving but cant really choose
She glances over at this guy
He looks and gets lost in her eyes
She feels this change deep inside
He feels it coming he wants to cry
She listens to this sound she follows its command
He cant contain it he wants her so bad
She looks to him and sees his feelings
He looks back and his heart is healing
She says yes her heart skips a beat
He notices his heart has stopped he lifts her off her feet
She is stuck in a bond that will last til days end
He is confident that this is his hearts hopeful trend
She says forever yours
He says without you never more
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tornheartsneverheal
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is this actuality?its very sweet. you should consider trying to get published
 
jb1550
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im trying i mean i dont know how or where and yes based on true events well the sad part not the whole getting back together part but im only 14 so getting published would be kinda big
 
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hahaha i remember this
 


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