Hello Guest!Join NowLogin
LOVE POEMS & QUOTES
  Latest Posts   Live Tracker   Popular Posts   All Blogs   Drilldown   Tags   My Favorite Blogs   My Blog

JidapaLovesYou's blog

 

Four Letter Lie

You said you'd love more forever more
You promised your love for me would never end
It turns out your love is no more than a four letter lie

The next day you've gone
And left the shattered remains of my heart behind
My blood shead tears are streaming down the walls

Your no better than anyone else
My heart has been broken to many times
And now I'm running out of tape
And running out of the energy to run my life
I could jsut end it with one cut...



You can say that your love was a four letter lie!
bad
4
good
 
 

Comments

larkinpain
larkinpain
comment permalink
bad
1
good
 
Cutting doesn't solve anything. It makes everything worse. Don't fool yourself.
 
Josh Wolski
Josh Wolski
comment permalink
bad
0
good
 
Dont a-ssume that she cuts herself. That line can be added to show intensity. I Loved your poem. Short but I feel there was alot meaning there. Keep up the good work.
 


Post a Comment

Please login to post a comment.

 
 
LoveLandia site is in BETA mode. Email us your reports & suggestions.
 
About | FAQ | Terms | Privacy | ContactCopyright © 2007 BoonEx. Powered by Shark 2.0b.
LOADING
PET:0.292035102844