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Flood of blood

Are you listening?
Do you even care?
As I lie here,
Blood in my hair!
I am laying here,
In my own blood!
Is it a puddle?
Or is it a flood?
I don't know,
Because I can't move!
I am dead now!

Can't you see?
This is how,
You wanted it to be!
As I lie here,
Dying slowly!
I wonder,
Who is here holdin' me?
Is it an angel?
Is it a dove?
Could it be,
The one I love?
Could it be them?
Could it be you?
Or is it no one?
Not even a few?
Who is standing,
In my blood?
Is it the one,
Who caused this flood?
The flood of tears.
The flood of sadness.
The flood of death.
The flood of madness.
It is the flood of blood!
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imaass
imaass
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wow love it
its deep
 
sexymoonfairy
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It is deep because it comes from my soul! Deep into my soul! Thats what my poems are. They are my soul, little bits and peices of what I am feeling deep inside. Thanks for reading my poem!
 
Marie aka Chiquita
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Wow I really love your poems! Keep up the good work ok mija! let all your dreams thoughts and personal encounters insprire you to write!
 
Pollyanna
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I like the way you shortened your stanzas toward the end..it gave it a sense of fading..
 


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